Monday, July 16, 2007

Unit three ethical essay

It is estimated that 55% of the adult population in the United States are either obese or overweight. Obesity has increased in a way to where an individual is at risk of suffering from chronic diseases such as hypertension, coronary artery disease, and diabetes. Those with excess fat in the abdominal area are at increased health risk.While obesity rates have become higher, levels of physical activity have lessened. For the overweight, a lifestyle approach to physical activity may be less likely but can be helped by just a simple exercise. There are many things that can be done that could prevent obesity from happening. Studies have shown that the core of this problem as young as kids start right from the parents. Parents who prefer to eat out and do fast food all the time. Instead of making the family a nice healthy home cooked meal.Each year obesity causes at lease three hundred thousand deaths in the United States. I feel that this is something that can be prevented by each individual person if we ourselves started doing more physical activities. Most peoples daily lifestyles consist of sitting in a chair in front of the computer all day long. Then a family will choose to go to a movie instead of going for a hike. Video games, movies, computers, ect. has changed people life styles tremendously.I think that if we just allowed some exercise of any kind through out the day that it would make a huge differance.I myself, have a treadmill in my living room, so when there is a day that I didn't gat any physical activity in. I will run on that for about two miles. I feel every little bit helps. In just doing a little thing like that, twenty minutes out of the day, could lessen the statistic of obese people.

2 comments:

Laurel Murray said...

After reading your ethucal issue essay about exercise, I felt it reached baseline work. The reaosn being is that the essay was pretty basic and did not contain all of the elements recommended.
The two best feutures of your essay are organization and your personal experiences with exercise. The essay flowed very well and it was nice to see what options you take to stay physically active.
The two things that could use improvement are different perspectives on the issue and a little bit more details about the issue. I felt that it was a basic essay and didn't really engage any thorough information.
Something new that your essay made me think about was the fact that obesity causes 300,000 deaths per year. That is frightening!
And, the thing that most surprised me about the essay was that over half the U.S. population is overweight or obese! We need to get freakin' moving man!
Anyway, good job on your essay.

b said...

The two best things about your essay where organization and how you had personal imput and experiance to comment on. I would suggest two improvements one being that you clearly set out actual activities etc on how to improve health and obesity. You mentioned one briefly the tredmil but more would help support your essay. Also if you spent more time discusing different view points maybe. Your statistics in the begining were very interesting and really set a nice tone for your essay but from there it needed a little work. Overall though it was a very nice essay.